Fic: Bone Deep by DontEatBlue & 2DamnPretty2Die (Chapter 11)
Title: Bone Deep
Authors: 2DamnPretty2Die & DontEatBlue
Summary: Sometimes you don’t get happy endings in life, and if you do, sometimes that happy ending is just that, an end, and it leaves you as fast as you found it. Sometimes all you can do is take the happiness offered and realize that is all you are going to get. And it’s up to you to make that time worthwhile.
Disclaimer: to be determined, to include the obvious mumbojumbo: Not ours, it’s playtime, tis all. The end.
AN: Um, we forgot to discuss an Authors’ Note and as I promised to get this posted tonight after stalling for a few days (I was busy and tumblr posting takes more effort than it should), so we shall not discuss one and I shall post without supervision. (Run child with scissors, run faster!!!)—- It was a cool summer’s night where the breeze cut up off the bayou bringing smells of the past burning into the present of mind. Tears sprung to your eyes as vicious memories began their delusional march. Your heart on edge, unprepared for the onslaught but ready and willing nonetheless. Your body begins throbbing, electricity all around you. The pain builds, almost unbearable but the pleasure behind it you find undeniable, desirable. And then without notice, the door’s dance with the breeze ends as oak slams, splintering against the frame. You’re brought back to reality as the tears just begin to fall. It’s not fair. “It’s not fair.” You are now screaming into the empty and lonely void. “IT’S NOT FAIR.” You beat your fisted hands against your tensed thighs relishing in the physical pain over the emotional one, choosing the former over the latter any day.
Wha da fuck?
Ha! In plain English: we cut the chapter at a rather painful spot (for you). We had to make a cut as it was over 10,000 words and we weren’t posting something of that size because too much was going on and inevitably something would be missed while reading.We did think very hard, including our SUPER-beta Shinata-Riyoko, where it should be cut off. We did not pick this place lightly even if it is rather deliciously evil on our parts.
Thank you to our SUPER-beta for doing her thing on the entire 10,000 words. To nyladreams who is an awesome pre-reader who catches everything and is like my pocket mouse. Oooh, I’m going to call you Pocket Mouse. And now you’ll forever hate me, sorry. And to L just because I love you and for no other fluffy, mushy reason than that. (Piss on that Sadie and I’ll scalp your Scottish ass, love you too) The end. Sorry for the ramble, I was having too much fun
Chapter Eleven: Happiness in Ignorance